The LoLexis was wonderful as usual.
-Rhea (
for all kinds of reasons today)
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NorthxNorthwest |
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I adore AJ and Juliette. AJ never did find anyone on the show that I thought clicked jes right with him, so it's nice to get it in fic. It's funny, I'm almost as invested in them as I am in LoLexis. Color me shocked! The lip gloss was a meltworthy moment... good on AJ, getting through that thick shell.
The LoLexis was wonderful as usual. -Rhea ( for all kinds of reasons today)
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Strytllr |
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I really enjoyed this chapter. From Alexis' mixture of bravado and flight impulses to AJ shopping for Juliette to the final "Dont make me regret trusting you," I was following each character and totally involved in where they were going.
Did that make sense? What strikes me about your writing in contrast to TFGH, is how adult your work is. Everything on GH these days comes across as so puerile. |
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Laclyn |
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EEEEEEE!! I just found this story and you've started to update again. That makes me so happy!!
Now that I've got that out, I just have to say that I absolutely love this story! Fanfic where Alexis is portrayed so in character(well in character if the writers weren't such hacks)is so rare. And your Lorenzo is sooo sexy!! Plus their relationship is so complicated and hot hot HOT! Well I'm done gushing. Thanks for continuing the story. Lacye |
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CL |
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Quote: Aj and Juliette are so sweet. AJ can be the sweetest person in the whole world, when given the chance! Quote: Alexis is starting to enjoy her time with Lorenzo! I love them together. CQ, you do such a great job in writing these characters and not chance the ESSENSE of the characters, like those ptb. Quote: what a MAN! poor guy is starting to get to a point where he can truly be hurt by Alexis. And he is so in love with her!!! Quote: look at that...both are doing what they do best and at the same time trying to hide the hurt in their voices! CQ - it's been a week now hasn't it? shouldn't the next chapter be out already?!!? CL |
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ronda714 |
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I'm always happy to see this story updated, CQ! I'm short on words, as it's now 7 in the morning as I write this, lol. A chapter a week, huh? That's a weighty promise. But, you know, no pressure! ~*Ronda
Priscilla Fan #1 LoHo #135, Bitchlover #28, Z.I.A #11, Always Loving Zexis, Lorenzo Lover #11, PEARL#408, Rebecca Supporter #22, Elizabeth Babe #17, Ric Angel #21 & Rick Angel #21, SlickRic #40, Lorenzo Addict #25, Lorenzo Alcazar Supporter #20, Alcazar Fanatic #19, I Love Lorenzo #18, TK Fan #4, TK Cheerleader #4, TK Loyalist #6, TK Lover #5 ![]() |
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GH69 |
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continuing the story. It is excellent.
N. |
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Strytllr |
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Chained! Chained! Chained! Chained! Chained! Chained!
Sorry. I'm in rock concert mode. :-/ ---------------------------------------------
Won't let the light escape from me Won't let the darkness swallow me Deconstruction BW FAN IN MOURNING #2 :( |
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CQ1 |
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Quote: I think what makes it work: She's more screwed up than he is. Thanks! CQ |
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CQ1 |
Re: YAY! New chapter. | ||
Quote: Perfect! Exactly what I want to hear. Glad you are enjoying it. Thanks, CQ |
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CQ1 |
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Quote: I love Rexis but there is just so much heat with Lolexis. Maybe it's the love/hate thing. I don't know. Writing Alexis is difficult. I think the only one who's harder is Luke! Glad you see her as in character. Thanks! CQ |
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CQ1 |
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Quote: I think she's been "enjoying" her time with Lorenzo for awhile now. I mean, who wouldn't? Quote: Yes, things wer going SO well. Too well. Sigh..... Thanks! CQ |
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CQ1 |
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Quote: I didn't promies, did I? Gulp! I'm trying. Working on my timae management skills here. Doing my best. So. Not. Good. Enough! But maybe after I made the big jump in the last chapter, it will come a little easier. Thanks! CQ |
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CQ1 |
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Quote: Thanks so much for continueing to read it!!! Thanks! CQ |
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